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Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks for restacking 🫶

Penelope Blackwood's avatar

Lovely writing and such a powerful piece ❤️

Stran Dong's avatar

Oh my this is incredibly beautiful ❤️

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks Stran, appreciate you and thanks for the restack 🫶💛

Stran Dong's avatar

I love the outdoors...and this is beautifully inclusive of the outdoors!!! I want to print this out and frame it...it's that good!! All the artwork on my walls is of the outdoors ❤️

Vianne Armour's avatar

Ooooooo do it and yes I was totally immersed in the outdoors writing it, I love the outdoors too 🔥🙏

Stran Dong's avatar

Thank you 😊 totally appreciate your permission to frame it for my wall

M.L. Allen's avatar

This is a woman who knows what she wants. This is SO freaking good.

Vianne Armour's avatar

Mwah you, so grateful for that comment, thankyou thankyou

Dean M's avatar

So delicate, even délicieux, direct but indirect at the same time. J'aime.

Sapphra's avatar

This is so beautiful, Vianne. I love how grounded your voice feels. It’s so sensual. My favorite line is "this need that makes my sex burn." Brilliant!

Emmett Tatter's avatar

Always ✨

Summer of Men's avatar

This line “my curves undulating like dunes”🔥

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks 🫶

Hyperscribe's avatar

We are here in the pine forest,

It’s Ever Green,

The angels sing for you in chorus,

They enhance the scene.

Water drenched dress,

Highlights your curves,

My body against yours begins to press,

Every inch loved as it deserves.

I remove your dress and it floats away,

You look at me with your blue-green eyes,

The current pulls but here we stay,

You want to know how I will surprise.

No foreplay needed,

You’re already ready,

The thought has been seeded,

I hold you steady.

The pureness of the forest stream,

The drip of dew and caw of birds,

You gasp and moan, then you scream,

Lost in passion, no need for words.

We finish, and laugh, and embrace, and kiss,

And the water takes away your inner moisture,

But leaves behind my gift of bliss,

And I hold you still in our locked posture.

My woodland nymph, my water fairy,

You taste of mint and fresh pressed berry.

Let me stay here with you forever,

Though the look you give me says you’ll never.

And then you playfully dunk my head,

And when I arise for air, you said:

“Sleep now human man and be content,

You’ve given me more than heaven has sent.”

Vianne Armour's avatar

Wow, this is amazing 🤩 and you wrote that so quickly too. Beautiful 🫶 I’ll read it again shortly I love how it’s bridges a sense of fantasy with reality 👌

Hyperscribe's avatar

Well that picture just brought me there 😏😉

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks for the restack Oli 🫶