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Victoria L Mead's avatar

The darkness in this is stunning.

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks Victoria

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Shadow Pursuit's avatar

very cute collab indeedπŸ–€πŸ¦β€β¬›

Yolanda D.'s avatar

Reading poetry like this sparks a deep, exhilarating connection within meβ€”two incredible writers, one breathtaking masterpiece! πŸ–€β™₯οΈπŸ–€

Night Cracks's avatar

Much appreciated. Thank you! πŸ–€

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thankyou so much Yolanda!

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow this is amazing. Well done you two!

She left him wanting.

She left him cold.

With nothing but

her scent to hold.

This is beautiful this part I really like it!

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, friend πŸ–€

Emmett Tatter's avatar

I love both of your works so much. This was no exception!! Great piece! Love how it was spun together, two wonderful writers doing their damn thing!! ✨✨✨πŸͺ„πŸ«‘ respect 🫑

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, Emmet!

Our writing process was crazy. Tough start, then slowly learning what we're about.

We ended up utterly synchronized, forgetting which line belonged to whom πŸ–€

Emmett Tatter's avatar

Yo that’s funny you said that! Because I even had trouble toward the end working out who was who. Loved everything about it. Ready for an encore ✨🌹

Night Cracks's avatar

That was the goal :)

Thanks again and have a wonderful day, friend!πŸ–€

Damien's avatar

Great work, you two! <3 <3

Vianne Armour's avatar

Thanks sweetheart

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the stranger's avatar

Beautiful ✨

Well done both of you 🫢🏾

Night Cracks's avatar

Thank you, stranger πŸ–€

the stranger's avatar

You're welcome βœ¨πŸ–€

Diana Shah ✦'s avatar

I loved the tension between love and death throughout this. Beautifully written, both of you 🀍

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Thank you, Diana πŸ–€