Beautiful short story, but I’m intrigued as to why you’ve titled it as taboo, because of the age difference ? Or that he’s a married man? Just being curious Vianne. I look at it as an adventure, a first time experience. Between friends 💜
Touché … I stand corrected 😂, either way I did enjoy reading it, for this old man it’s a fantasy that’ll never come true. But one can always wonder & wish. 💋
Hot, Hot, Hot! I wonder if Elena has a girlfriend that she’d like to share with Julian? Love your writing style
Thankyou
Fantastic adventure...truly a fortunate man to be given the honor ❤️ a little taboo, a lot oh so hot 🔥 🥵 ❤️
Ooooohhhh yay 😀 it is a cheeky number but I’m rather fold of it 💥
Beautiful short story, but I’m intrigued as to why you’ve titled it as taboo, because of the age difference ? Or that he’s a married man? Just being curious Vianne. I look at it as an adventure, a first time experience. Between friends 💜
Age difference and married but yes in the taboo erotica world of ‘I fucked my teenage step sister’ it’s pretty tame 🤣🤣
Touché … I stand corrected 😂, either way I did enjoy reading it, for this old man it’s a fantasy that’ll never come true. But one can always wonder & wish. 💋
The prose is elegant, the setting vivid, and Elena is such a refreshing, empowered character.
Agree, for a virgin story, I knew she needed to be a badass. Thanks Laura
This was absolutely beautiful.
Thanks you I really appreciate that feedback 💛
Your detailed descriptions were exquisite. I luv your writing style. Although the ending seemed a bit rushed.
You might have a point. Let me look at that. I nothing if not open to feedback, thats how we get 'good'! Thanks
I tweaked the end can you let me know if it reads better? x
Let's go to the beach together and rewrite the ending! 💜
What a great response 💥
I’m reading this in a coffee shop right now and I audibly groaned😩🫠💛
lol, I wrote it in a coffee shop and I swear the two teenagers giggling over my shoulder could read my mind 🤣🤣😈
Beautiful and evocative 🙏🏼