Enchanting. I really loved the way this felt - both classical and quietly, almost feverishly, erotic. I'm especially drawn to this kind of elegant sensuality, and the Amsterdam setting only deepened that atmosphere. What I enjoyed most was the tension: the constant interplay between what is revealed and what remains unspoken. Thank you for writing.
Amsterdam becomes more than a setting here—it feels like a third presence. The cold canal air, oak door, espresso and beer, passing boats, rain and city smog all intensify the heat between the lovers. Sensual, atmospheric, and wonderfully cinematic.
An enchanting poem and a beautiful old picture of the Oudezijds Voorburgwal in the rain with the church of St. Nicholas in the background and a piece of the Old Church on the left.
So sensual. Loved the way Amsterdam is deeply intertwined into the eroticscape. Water canals tracing the city, just like those fingers learning the way. 💖
Enchanting. I really loved the way this felt - both classical and quietly, almost feverishly, erotic. I'm especially drawn to this kind of elegant sensuality, and the Amsterdam setting only deepened that atmosphere. What I enjoyed most was the tension: the constant interplay between what is revealed and what remains unspoken. Thank you for writing.
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I think you may like this also 🫶
Thankyou that’s exactly what I was hoping for ☺️
This is great! Lovely build up just like the couple in the poem experiencing a high👏🏼🔥
The city
did not need to know.
The canal boats passed.
The canal air lingered.
And two people
used Amsterdam
the way cities
were always quietly built for —
to hold
what cannot be held
anywhere else.
— AËLA
I loved it there. I want to go back with somebody that I want to kiss like that picture shows, stay up all night and read poetry
Mmmmm yes, me to 🫶
I hope to see you there each of us with ours, and we will just smile at each other
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So good. May we all be there soon my soul sisters.
Pure magic.
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Oh my. I feel the burn here. Intensely beautiful burn 🔥
🫠 holy fuq.. killer killer killllleerrrrr 🔥🔥🔥
Ahhhhhh thankyou so so much 💛
🔥❤️🔥
Thank you so much
Love this. So well done. Great job 🌹🌹✨ it’s badass
Ooooooo badass from you 🫶 love that, thanks 🙏
Amsterdam becomes more than a setting here—it feels like a third presence. The cold canal air, oak door, espresso and beer, passing boats, rain and city smog all intensify the heat between the lovers. Sensual, atmospheric, and wonderfully cinematic.
Ooooo I so like doing that with environments so Thankyou
An enchanting poem and a beautiful old picture of the Oudezijds Voorburgwal in the rain with the church of St. Nicholas in the background and a piece of the Old Church on the left.
Oooooo you know Amsterdam well, I’ve never lived there but 6 glorious visits I remember well
My university had one of its main buildings very near the beginning of the canal in the picture. It is behind a gallery with bookstalls.
The beauty of your writing here Vianne is so good.
Thankyou Peter, I had a muse close to my heart for this one. Two if you count that I’ve been to Amsterdam 6 or so times 🫶
Well it really shows you set a wonderful scene ❤️.
Thankyou so so much Peter
👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Love the scene being conjured and the vintage imagery. 🙏🏼❤️🔥🙏🏼
Thankyou so much Brian
Your sentences flow and grow as I read, a beautiful, sensual visual rhythm. I love it! 🔥❤️
Hey Nimila. Thankyou so so much I definitely wanted to capture that water magic and mystery 🫶🫶
So sensual. Loved the way Amsterdam is deeply intertwined into the eroticscape. Water canals tracing the city, just like those fingers learning the way. 💖